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CharlaXHaiku
OffWeederChine
Auf weid er shine off weed er chine 8
Do not weep for weed er shine 7
Off weed er chine auf weid er shine 8
Weep for weed ing chin a men 7
Here we have the classic form but it fits no known patteran it is neither tanka nor haiku. Let us call for edit.
Off Weider Chine
A CharlaXHaiku
Auf Wieder Shine Off Weeder 7
Weep for Weeder Chine 5
Weep for China Men 5
ed.note.ed After edit we have a haiku author complains the meaning is clear let the edit explain Inn this country we have many ethnic races Homeowners hire them as Gardenors at large Estates hence the Chinamen were riding lawnmowers on this Poem Formatted.
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